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Feedback please [LOGO]July 26, 2017 at 7:57pm
This logo is for a Field Engineering organization in a Law Enforcement tech sector company. Any feedback you have is much appreciated. Thank you! :)
July 26, 2017 at 8:00pm
but, you're not far off from a negative-space E in that logo. have you considered trying that?
Do you mean this?
One of the reason I wanted to keep them "." in the logo is so I can do stuff like this:
I took a couple very quick stabs at being more intentional about the E, but I don't think either work well
I don't see the . what am i missing?
Understood. Thanks for the suggestion :)
How intentional do you think the "E" needs to be? I think it's there if you are looking for it and next to the wordmark it seems to be clear.
July 27, 2017 at 7:59am
I Agree with Ryan try reflecting the top angle of the 'F'. Right now it looks like Field F.ngineering and I know people will correct it to engineering in their head and like you said 'It's there if you are looking for it', but, you want the word mark to be clear as possible so it's read as Field Engineering straight away. Also the F. looks like there is a lower case a in the negative space. I think your on to something here and I like how simple the approach is, really it just needs tweaking and you'll end up with something really smart.
August 28, 2017 at 4:59pm
Perhaps the horizontal symmetry could help highlight the E in the F. This could be done by rounding toe bottom left bar in the F, and slanting the top left of the dot. I will try to mock it up quickly - I could be totally off.
Aaaaand I should read all the replies first ^ looks like these guys are onto something.
Not quite there imo, but perhaps it will provoke some more ideas.
Negative space logos are difficult. My suggestion would be to treat the logotype and logomark separately and pull the "dot" closer to the "F" so the edge of the dot aligns with the second bar in the F1